Well, you did a great job animating so I can´t really complain about anything, lol.
But I would still recommend to maybe try and draw more straight and smooth lines?
Try 50 in smooth maybe?
And I don´t wish to hate, which is why I am telling you this advice, because you actually got talent in animation, that is for sure and I have indeed seen your other drawings.
If you have or want a drawing tablet) then I recommend you a Wacom Intuos, it is worth the money believe me and hey, try to watch DrawWithJazza on youtube, he teaches really good and then I am sure youwill turn even more better and amazing! Sorry if this sounds rude or anything -who knows- but yeah, I can see something in you so I wish to give advices/help :)
1.Thanks for the advice I appreciate it and the positive feedback.
2. I agree i should draw with more smooth lines and I'm trying to find which percentage of smoothing I'd like to use.
3.I agree I should get a Wacom Intous but until I get one I'm using a Monoprice 9 tablet, its not the best but it gets the job done for now.
Anyways, again, thanks for the constructive criticism :)
This is so much, you got a fan here pal, great job.
Nice troll pal.
Also great animation!
I like this kind of animation style, great job.
Actually there is no need to upload this.. XD
But pretty nice!
i will improve in the future if you want to check my latest work, please follow me, thanks for your comment
Great animation, but yeah..
The storyline is too..
Again, try to make hentai stories!
Your anatomy style is good!
I don´t know why, but there is just something.. Like really, something about your style that makes me want more..
I will give this 5 Rate.
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