Well, you did a great job animating so I can´t really complain about anything, lol.
But I would still recommend to maybe try and draw more straight and smooth lines?
Try 50 in smooth maybe?
And I don´t wish to hate, which is why I am telling you this advice, because you actually got talent in animation, that is for sure and I have indeed seen your other drawings.
If you have or want a drawing tablet) then I recommend you a Wacom Intuos, it is worth the money believe me and hey, try to watch DrawWithJazza on youtube, he teaches really good and then I am sure youwill turn even more better and amazing! Sorry if this sounds rude or anything -who knows- but yeah, I can see something in you so I wish to give advices/help :)
1.Thanks for the advice I appreciate it and the positive feedback.
2. I agree i should draw with more smooth lines and I'm trying to find which percentage of smoothing I'd like to use.
3.I agree I should get a Wacom Intous but until I get one I'm using a Monoprice 9 tablet, its not the best but it gets the job done for now.
Anyways, again, thanks for the constructive criticism :)
This is so much, you got a fan here pal, great job.
Great job pal, it is simply and fun!
First: Bad quality, seriously, you need to get a better program for animation and you HAVE to take lessons from Jazza on Youtube, it is free.
Second: DON´T USE COPYRIGHTED SONGS!
Find some uncopyrighted, ask for the rights OR make your OWN.
First: This game was made by my brother (10) in like 2 hours and was for friends at school as a sort of inside joke so I'm terribly sorry if you offended you
Second: It's not meant to be taken seriously so don't hurt my feelings
Third: I am the king of new York
Try to redo it when you lose, because the flash really hurts.....
Yo man, I am making a story, which I am planning on turning into a game too.
I have found a programmer.
So, all I now need is: A music maker and a guy to draw the characters in pixel -we will see about that-
I don´t guarantee that this will happen because ANYTHING could happen..
nevermind to that.
You know how to make background musics, thats great!
-Btw you won´t get paid for anything, sorry but I can´t afford paying anyone-
Do you want to help?
I will link you some few songs I want you to make your own version of!
- Thanks for reading :)
yeah sure why not :D
Is there copyright in this?
Like, can use it as long as I gives you credits? :)
It's released on album so it will be marked as official online yes.
Well, maybe you could have added something super in the middle? Idk, anyway, great beat!
R.I.P Edd Gould.
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.